
I like the premises of this story it had a solid plot, and while there were a few dull moments no big problems.
Now the problems. In Dragon’s Tribute, Rowena is offered up as a

Over all good idea, the delivery is totally off. The beginnings good, it draws you in, but once Rowena discovers her other half she becomes annoying. The dragon gives her a home, takes care of her, loves her, but she seems to take it all for granted. She wants to go home, which is understandable, but on the other hand these same people left her to die. Even so she decides to runaway.
I have to be honest, I stopped reading here, I couldn’t force myself to finish. All I could see was disaster and the dragon having to save her ass.
Sigh. I guess I just like my heroines to have a little back bone or at least smarts.
On top of this you have the purple prose. Using descriptions like, “the apples of paradise” and “rose petals with a folded bud and honey at the center” left me laughing and just skimming the few sex scenes I did read after.
I’ll understand if you take this review with a grain of salt, I mean I didn’t finish but maybe you can.
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